ext_30949 ([identity profile] xlivvielockex.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr 2007-05-21 09:19 pm (UTC)

Very cute little story. You might want to watch your tenses though. You switched from present to past at least once that I saw on the first read through. But other than that, very cute.
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