Well, welcome to the community. :) I am glad that you found us and decided to post such fantastic fiction here.
I really like how you captured the kind of thoughts that might be happening in River's headspace. Really good there. You have a great and vivid use of language as well.
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Date: 2007-07-18 03:18 am (UTC)I really like how you captured the kind of thoughts that might be happening in River's headspace. Really good there. You have a great and vivid use of language as well.