ext_2544 ([identity profile] redrikki.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr 2007-09-15 09:37 pm (UTC)

I loved your use of descriptive language in this. I especially liked the images of Wash's shrine and the ballet of the rain drops. I like the concept of a shrine to Wash, and the dance of the rain drops was very lyrical.
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