I really like how you use Faith wanting to protect a kid she thinks is in danger to bring them together - it speaks volumes about her assumptions about what life it like for a child.
Nice interaction with Remus too, and her thinking that maybe her type hasn't been working for her. The etiquette stuff kicking in was a great touch. I esp liked:
Faith’s jaw never dropped. That wasn’t something it did. So that didn’t happen. But it kind of felt like it wanted to.
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Date: 2008-02-22 03:24 am (UTC)Nice interaction with Remus too, and her thinking that maybe her type hasn't been working for her. The etiquette stuff kicking in was a great touch. I esp liked:
Faith’s jaw never dropped. That wasn’t something it did. So that didn’t happen. But it kind of felt like it wanted to.