ext_2544 ([identity profile] redrikki.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr2008-05-28 10:47 pm
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Prompt 067: Not the Slayer

Title: Not the Slayer
Author: Redrikki
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Prompt: 067 Dawn
Character: Dawn



At fifteen, Buffy saved L.A. from vampiric hordes. By the end of her second day at Sunnydale High, she’d managed to make friends and avert an apocalypse. At fifteen, Dawn was still getting her ass kicked by vampiric hordes of one, and her high school experience was less than stellar. Okay, yeah, technically, so she was only three, but Dawn wasn’t the Slayer, and that was the point. She didn’t have powers of preternatural ass kicking; she just had herself. But sometimes that, a cell phone and a bag of bricks were all you needed to keep your friends alive.

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
Well done. POor Dawnie doesn't often get the cred she deserves :)

[identity profile] piratescribe.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I really liked this! :) Go Dawn!
angelus2hot: (Tyr1)

[personal profile] angelus2hot 2008-05-29 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
lol! Yep, A bag of bricks should do it!

Nicely done!

I enjoyed reading this.

[identity profile] ozma914.livejournal.com 2008-05-31 08:53 am (UTC)(link)
I love it -- it shows both the jealousy and the determination that Dawn could show, depending on which was most appropriate!

[identity profile] firefly124.livejournal.com 2008-05-31 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice.

[identity profile] ubiquirk.livejournal.com 2008-06-01 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice look at how Dawn did stop whining and start doing what she could right from the start of season 7!