Very cute little piece with great character interactions between Mal, Zoe and Wash. You really have the Firefly-speak down for the most part although your Simon seemed a little, I don't know, stilted maybe. This line in particular: Our rather precipitous leave from Santo has once again left us sadly depleted. Sorry to nit-pick. The rest of it was so spot-on that just stood out to me.
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Date: 2008-06-13 01:40 am (UTC)Sorry to nit-pick. The rest of it was so spot-on that just stood out to me.