http://aerintine.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aerintine.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr 2010-01-22 07:11 pm (UTC)

this was sweeping and gorgeous. characterizations could not be better. you've captured internal monologue perfectly, which is difficult to find in fic. i am floored by how the poem IS about spuffy. now i am anxious to explore ghazal further.
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