ext_97497 ([identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr 2010-02-13 09:24 pm (UTC)

That last paragraph? Awwww, poor Larry.

since the rumors had started to drift Larry’d gotten a pretty good idea where he stood with the jocks. I thought, based on a conversation Larry had with Xander, that the jocks were not being all assholey about it. He was pretty much in a place where everyone was cool with him, which sounds unlikely, I know.

Even with that bit that's non-canon but actually more realistic than canon, I like this story.

Soft brown eyes that saw a lot more than they were seen. Excellent description of Johnathan.

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