Attention to detail made for a vivid and very entertaining domestic scene. Skip and D'Hoffryn are so happy and obviously in love that it makes me grin. Somehow, among asides like credit talisman come-ons and drinking bile before dinner, you made their conversation plausible. D'Hoffryn asking how the novel was coming along made me smile, but Skip's I realized I’m going to have to rearrange the entire section about the mother and the llama ranch made me laugh out loud.
These two sharing an intimate dinner for two with a very nice arrangement of herbs and antlers on the dining table makes me very, very happy. Great job with this one.
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Date: 2010-03-12 12:16 am (UTC)These two sharing an intimate dinner for two with a very nice arrangement of herbs and antlers on the dining table makes me very, very happy. Great job with this one.