Thanks for the very detailed comments! You picked out lots of the little things that were so much fun to put in! It's encouraging when readers notice. (I struggled with the bile for a bit, but finally decided that since it was served cold, it was the right thing after all. Heh.)
I'm so happy it made you happy. That's what love is for!
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Date: 2010-03-12 02:02 am (UTC)I'm so happy it made you happy. That's what love is for!