"He was totally alone, in a city that now reminded him of humiliations past and present, chances forever missed. The sorriest vamp in the whole of Europe.
Hands thrust deep into his pockets, shoulders hunched, he stamped through puddles and glared..." For whatever reason this screamed Spike to me and made me laugh with knowing it was my boy! What you've writ is clever and sounded just like Buffy.. Thanks.
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Date: 2011-01-23 09:29 pm (UTC)"He was totally alone, in a city that now reminded him of humiliations past and present, chances forever missed. The sorriest vamp in the whole of Europe.
Hands thrust deep into his pockets, shoulders hunched, he stamped through puddles and glared..." For whatever reason this screamed Spike to me and made me laugh with knowing it was my boy! What you've writ is clever and sounded just like Buffy.. Thanks.