ext_7235 ([identity profile] rebcake.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr 2010-07-30 06:53 pm (UTC)

You've certainly captured the allure of the basset hound: not very bright but sweet, shambling, and trusting. I'd not have associated it with Spike, but I can see how it might fit his own image of William. Billy-dog has won my heart. Good job.

One more typo: Spike paused in the alley where the dog lived

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