Thanks. Glad you like my feedback. :) Hey, may I please post this Buffy story you've written on the website Archive of Our Own? (Archive of Our Own is a fan-created, fan-run, non-profit, non-commercial archive for transformative fanworks, such as fanfiction and fanart. It's really good.) I'll be sure to give you credit. :) If you don't want me to post it there, I understand completely, too. :)
~Abigail