ext_2544 ([identity profile] redrikki.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr2007-06-04 09:49 pm

016: Mr. Fix-It

Title: Mr. Fix-It
Author: Redrikki
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Prompt: 016, Tara
Characters: Xander, Tara


The carpet was ruined where she’d lain in the hours before they’d even known she was dead. Her blood had soaked through to the padding underneath, so Xander ripped that up too. He scrubbed the floor with Lysol until the smell of chemical overwhelmed the smell of death. Xander opened the window to let some air in. He needed to fix that. It was his job to fix things, to save the world with talking, but he hadn’t saved Tara and nothing would fix that. Xander surveyed the room. The carpet needed replacing. He wondered what color she’d have liked.

[identity profile] kgola.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
wow. short, but powerfully sad. and very Xander.

[identity profile] scarlettlily.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
Wow this was awesome and a great connection shown between Xander and Tara

[identity profile] lauratd.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
*sniff*
very Xander
ext_7165: (Taken)

[identity profile] alwaysjbj.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, so sad! Beautifully done.

[identity profile] not-purrrfect.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, I can so see Xander's brain running just like that. Very appropriate.
kaleecat: (Xander & Tara: Stand Together)

fb - mr. fix-it

[personal profile] kaleecat 2007-06-05 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
this is so real. so xander - exactly what I imagine him doing & thinking. focus on this one thing, fix it and try not to think about what he can't fix.

[identity profile] divadea.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice writing and very original.

[identity profile] rayruz.livejournal.com 2007-06-05 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god, that's so sad, and so Xander.

[identity profile] xlivvielockex.livejournal.com 2007-06-06 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
Captured Xander perfectly here. So very much like him to fix what he can and not dwell on what he couldn't. Really nice.

[identity profile] boy-named-susie.livejournal.com 2007-06-07 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
So sad, but extremely well done and definately in character for Xander. Great job.

[identity profile] zandra-x.livejournal.com 2007-06-10 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, Xander would deal with the aftermath of death. Very good. 8 ]

[identity profile] wereleopard58.livejournal.com 2007-06-22 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
Wow amazing and definately Xander dealing with things the only way he knows how
deird1: Fred looking pretty and thoughful (Default)

[personal profile] deird1 2009-05-01 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
This was beautiful.