016 Dying to be Heard

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Title Dying to be Heard
Author lauratd
Rating g
Word Count 100
Prompt 016 : Tara
Characters/Pairing (if any) Tara/Willow



She'd been raised to keep quiet,

(Silence is Golden)

to keep her thoughts to herself.

(Children should be seen not heard)

Even when she found the courage to speak up, she couldn't make herself heard over the screaming.


Until Willow...

Willow encouraged her to speak up; made her feel like someone worth listening to.

But now...

"Willow, Honey, Please! No!"

When she most needed Willow to hear...

"No magic... It can't help... not anymore!"

to listen...

"i don't need you to revenge me. I need you to be strong...like an Amazon."

she couldn't make herself heard over the screaming.

Comments

[not-purrrfect.livejournal.com]

That's awesomly done.

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks

I was playing around with the formatting of it and I was hoping it made sense.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Fabulous drabble!

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much!

[rayruz.livejournal.com]

Oh my god, that is just amazing. The spacing gave it a real poetic flow to it. Excellent work!

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks , I wasn't sure how to express the 3 different kinds of thoughts.
Glad you liked it.

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

Wow. That was impressive. I especially liked the formating. It was very creative and really helped highlight stuff.

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much.

[xlivvielockex.livejournal.com]

Great job with this. You did a really creative job with the formatting. It flows really well and sort of gives that disjointed afterdeath sort of thoughts.

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I wasn't sure how it would come across, I'm glad you liked it.

[boy-named-susie.livejournal.com]

Powerful and chilling. I love the format you used for this. Just awesome.

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much.

[zandra-x.livejournal.com]

Very good. 8 ]

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[wereleopard58.livejournal.com]

Wow that was amazing, it was ok i am a loss for words in a good way.

Amazing how much emotion you got

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much

[deird1]

Wow. This was excellent.

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

Thanks, coming from someone whose writing I respect as much as yours, that means a lot.