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Title: Fuel to the Fire
Author: [livejournal.com profile] smurfyfredels
Rating:PG
Word Count:129
Prompt: 17: Bring out your dead (Lilah)
Characters/Pairing: Lilah



She can’t say that she’s surprised to find out that an eternity in hell is well, an eternity in hell. She’s had a good eight years to prepare and she’d be lying if she said she hadn’t thought about it at least once a day since she signed her name on that dotted line.

They take away her pretty things, make her watch as they burn piles of Manolos and first editions. They put her in reception and make her a glorified secretary in a sweater and grandma pearls, forcing her to live (or un-live) out her worst nightmare.

But nothing beat that day when they made Lilah watch him on the big screen.

Nothing fueled the fire faster than seeing a lover wrapped up in someone else’s arms.

Date: 2007-06-09 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayruz.livejournal.com
Ouch... poor Lilah... did those words just come out of my mo-.... keyboard?

Date: 2007-06-09 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayruz.livejournal.com
I, unlike a lot of people, was fond of Lilah. She was a bitch but she owned her bitchiness. But there weren't many times to really feel badly for her, but I think she really did grow to love Wesley by the end.

This was excellent though.

Date: 2007-06-09 03:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alwaysjbj.livejournal.com
Oh yeah, that's gotta sting!

Nicely done.

Date: 2007-06-09 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loves-bitch1301.livejournal.com
Now I feel really bad for Lilah.

Date: 2007-06-09 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boy-named-susie.livejournal.com
Awww, poor Lilah. You did a great job making her a sympathetic figure. And personally, I always liked Wes better with Lilah than Fred :)

Date: 2007-06-10 03:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sl-podcast.livejournal.com
awwh poor Lilah! Well done... I loed the bit about burnning piles of Manolos.

Date: 2007-06-11 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauratd.livejournal.com
I like how you started off all funny and snappy and ended with devestation.
It's what Joss would do.

Date: 2007-06-11 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xlivvielockex.livejournal.com
Ooooh, I loved this. I just loved how they made her watch as they burned her beautiful things and the grandma pearls thing was priceless. I love me some Wes/Lilah so I can totally feel the sting here of having to watch Wes with someone else. I am tossing around a Wes/Lilah idea for this challenge, see if anything comes out.

Date: 2007-06-13 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] divadea.livejournal.com
Great mix of tragedy and comedy in so few words!

Date: 2007-06-22 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wereleopard58.livejournal.com
Well that is definately a personal hell for Lilah

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