Prompt 20: Fic and Icon

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Title You Drive Me Crazy
Author Wereleopard58
Rating PG
Word Count 118
Prompt 020 Free for All: Drusilla
Pairing (if any) Clairei



She screamed and rushed at the wall trying to escape but there was no where to go. Tears fell from her eyes. She turned so her back hit the corner of the walls and slowly sank to the floor. Her arms wrapped around her knees and bringing them up to her chest, rocking to and fro.

“Blood, so much everywhere, on my hands, in my hair. It will never wash away.” She sobbed as she saw so much death by the person who had put her here and left her.

It was the ultimate cruelty, being trapped in her own mind with no escape and seeing Angelus murder his way across Europe and she couldn’t let anyone know.

The End



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Comments

[lauratd.livejournal.com]

I like the way you framed Dru's face on the icon.

[xlivvielockex.livejournal.com]

I am a little bit confused by this piece, I think because you used pronouns instead of stating a name once. I saw the characters so this is suppose to be about Dru's sister, if Angelus had tortured her instead of Dru?

It is a great idea but I think it needs some clarification, maybe saying her name, saying that she saw her other two sisters slaughtered (and mention Dru there). I think that would make the piece a little more cohesive.

[wereleopard58.livejournal.com]

ok thanks for the comments and will make sure that i clarify things better in the future