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Title: University of Pylea Physics Dept.
Author: Beer Good ([livejournal.com profile] beer_good_foamy)
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Prompt: 023: Portal Through Time
Characters/Pairing (if any): Fred


158 days (159?) since hot showers, computers, public transport, refrigerators and a lot of things she's forgetting.

She's spent years learning stuff, when did it get so hard? She's supposed to be one of those thinkers who advance mankind's knowledge. She can explain Heisenberg's uncertainty principle, Einstein's theory of relativity, quantum mechanics... the other slaves hate her since they keep having to show her how to build a fire, skin a goat, even what leaves to wipe her ass with.

Fred counts the days on fingers whose nails are worn down to the flesh. 159, 160. One more memory gone.

Date: 2007-07-23 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayruz.livejournal.com
Poor Fred!

Date: 2007-07-23 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauratd.livejournal.com
Nice job showing the frustration of an expert in a situation were they are not-so-much with the knowledge-having. Her awareness of her memories slipping away is heart-wrenching.

Date: 2007-07-23 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boy-named-susie.livejournal.com
Aww, so sad. Great job showing what Fred was back home in order to contrast it to what she had become.

Date: 2007-07-26 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ubiquirk.livejournal.com
Ah, poor Fred! The difference between quantum theory and survival is very nicely made.

Date: 2007-07-27 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xlivvielockex.livejournal.com
I love the way that you put in the bit about her knowing all these physics principles but she doesn't know how to survive. Knowing way too many physicists (and even dating one) that have no common sense, totally hit the nail there. This was so sad though. Loved all the little details.

Date: 2007-07-27 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imbaskinrobbins.livejournal.com
Poor Fred. She knows so much, and nothing about how to survive. I love the last line.

Date: 2007-07-28 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] divadea.livejournal.com
Oh, ouch. Very very nice.

Date: 2007-09-15 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wereleopard58.livejournal.com
Wow that kind of hit you about Fred's life especially in such a short amount of words well done

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