Prompt 056: Pretty Floral Bonnet

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

Title: Pretty Floral Bonnet
Author: Redrikki
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Prompt: 056
Characters: Mal, Jayne, Zoe



Mal tied the ribbon on the bonnet and readjusted his skirts so he could draw his gun without getting it tangled. “How do I look?” he asked, turning around.

“Like no woman I ever saw.”

“Aw, don’t pay Jayne no mind, sir,” reassured Zoe, her lips twitching like she was trying not to laugh. “You look very fetching.”

Mal pulled his dignity ‘round him like a shawl. “Just remember, it takes a real man to wear a dress.”

“What’re you talking ‘bout, Mal?” Jayne asked as they climbed into the wagon. “Dresses are nothing. It’s them shoes that’ll kill ya.”

Comments

[thrace-adams.livejournal.com]

Oh this is awesome!

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

Thanks.

[(Anonymous)]

Hi,
hard to pick out what I like best about this, but I think Jayne's closing line just edges it. Oh Jayne! Very, VERY, funny.

Thanks.

Ray (kerkevik@planet-save.com)

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Maybe if we get around to Jayne this month I can write one about how he knows women's shoes are so uncomfortable.

[ubiquirk.livejournal.com]

Hee! How funny, and even better that Jayne knows how women's shoes feel!

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I really must write a Jayne in women's shoes story now.

[saracen77.livejournal.com]

This was lovely! Thank you!

I love the way Jayne just knows how those shoes are going to be! And that wearing dresses is easy? The man has way too much inside knowledge!

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it. I really must write a Jayne story about that.

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

“What’re you talking ‘bout, Mal?” Jayne asked as they climbed into the wagon. “Dresses are nothing. It’s them shoes that’ll kill ya.”

ROFLMAO!!

Great double-take line!

[redrikki.livejournal.com]

Thanks.