Prompt 059, Free For All, Manly Book.
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saracen77
Rating G
Word Count 100
Prompt 059 Free For All
Characters Book
AN Big thanks toubiquirk for a wonderful beta job, and all the encouragement she freely gives.
Power
The gun in his hand felt slick and oily. It was a once familiar, but now completely alien object in his hand.
Oh, he had made the glib remark about kneecaps, and in the time before, that would have been the macho thing to say. Today, it turned to ashes in his mouth.
It was funny, he reflected as he waited with Simon, how perspective changed as you grew older.
As a young man, the power had been in the metal and the fight. Today, the power was in the idea, the passion, and the white collar at his throat .
Author
saracen77Rating G
Word Count 100
Prompt 059 Free For All
Characters Book
AN Big thanks to
ubiquirk for a wonderful beta job, and all the encouragement she freely gives.Power
The gun in his hand felt slick and oily. It was a once familiar, but now completely alien object in his hand.
Oh, he had made the glib remark about kneecaps, and in the time before, that would have been the macho thing to say. Today, it turned to ashes in his mouth.
It was funny, he reflected as he waited with Simon, how perspective changed as you grew older.
As a young man, the power had been in the metal and the fight. Today, the power was in the idea, the passion, and the white collar at his throat .
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Date: 2008-04-01 11:45 pm (UTC)You captured Book perfectly.
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Date: 2008-04-02 11:10 am (UTC)I adored Book, and couldn't leave him out during the free for all!
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
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Date: 2008-04-02 02:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-02 11:11 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-02 09:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-03 07:23 am (UTC)I always really hoped that Joss would fill in Book's blanks for me, but hasn't seemed to have got round to it yet... I have to resort to making these things up!
Thanks again for your feedback.
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Date: 2008-04-04 02:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-08 01:41 pm (UTC)Thank you for all your help... I left that rotten comma in, in the end. It's sitting there taunting me...
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Date: 2008-04-07 05:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-08 01:42 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for leaving kind feedback.
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Date: 2008-04-07 11:59 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-08 01:45 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed what I did with him. I just wish Joss would let the cat out of the bag about Book and put us all out of our misery!
Thank you again for your support, and lovely feedback.