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Title: Not Broken
Author: [livejournal.com profile] firefly_124
Rating: PG
Word Count: 230
Prompt: 066 - River
Characters/Pairing (if any): River/Kaylee
A/N: Set just after “War Stories.”



It isn’t enough, stopping the bad men from killing Kaylee. She’s still scared. Kaylee isn’t supposed to be scared. She’s supposed to be happy and run and play games. She’s not broken. No power in the ‘verse can stop her.

Engine thrums and Kaylee glows. Safe here. Perfect time, perfect place.

No words. Inefficient. Lips against soft lips. It should be wonderful. For a second, it almost is.

“River, honey, that’s not … I mean …”

“Kiss and make it better.” Have to get this part right. “That bit’s not broken. She would never hurt you.”

“I know. I think.” Fingers smooth River’s hair. “I hope. I won’t tell. You don’t have to … you don’t have to do anything so’s I won’t tell. I just won’t, okay?”

Confusing thoughts. Sad thoughts, angry thoughts. Not angry at River. Good. Not scared anymore either. Also good. But still sad. So sad. This is not the optimum outcome of this interaction.

“Kissing didn’t make it better.”

“No, River. You don’t have to kiss me to make it better.”

Of course she doesn’t have to. She wants to. But it makes Kaylee sad. Unacceptable.

“It’s okay. I won’t kiss you again.” Funny how that’s harder than picking up a gun.

Kaylee smiles, and River thinks maybe they’re still friends.

Two victories in one day. River grins. Much better than throwing up apple bits.

Date: 2008-05-22 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piratescribe.livejournal.com
Awwwwww! This was so sweet and beautiful! Lovely River voice here!

Date: 2008-05-22 07:52 pm (UTC)
deird1: Fred looking pretty and thoughful (Default)
From: [personal profile] deird1
Just lovely. And very Riverish.

Date: 2008-05-22 08:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] angelus2hot
Very sweet!

Great River voice!

Date: 2008-05-23 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
Very well done!

Date: 2008-05-23 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laiksmarei.livejournal.com
Wow ... I just ... wow. You, madam, have exquisitely captured River's intricacies. An emotional and insightful piece. I love it.

Date: 2008-05-23 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ubiquirk.livejournal.com
I love the way you have River trying to feel out how to make it better and how to interpret the impressions she gets from Kaylee!

Date: 2008-05-24 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozma914.livejournal.com
That was beautifully done.

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