http://brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr2009-06-02 08:00 pm

120 Ficlet: Good Girl

Title Good Girl
Author Bruttimabuoni
Rating PG
Word Count 180
Prompt 120 Free for All
Characters/Pairing (if any) Drusilla
A/N: Originally written for Good Drusilla month at [livejournal.com profile] good__evil




It’s raining, it’s pouring,
The old man is snoring


Sing-song sing-song in Drusilla’s head. Why is she singing? Because she’s happy. Why is she happy? Because she’s not scared any more. So many weeks of fear and hiding and loss and death and there won’t be any more of that thank you.

Why not, Drusilla? Why ever not?

It’s raining, it’s sleeting,
The old man is bleeding


Why is he bleeding? Because…because someone is eating him.

That someone is you, Drusilla.

“No. That’s not true. I’m a good girl.”

It’s raining, it’s pouring,
The old man is … dead.
He went to bed to mend his head
And couldn’t get up in the morning.


Nor never will again, Drusilla.

“Why are you talking to me? “

Because I’m you, your own self. And you’re going to come with me into the darkness.

“But I’m a good girl. I want to be good. I want… I wanted….”

Not any more, Drusilla. Because you killed the old man.

Bye bye, good girl.
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[identity profile] zoesmith.livejournal.com 2009-06-02 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow *shudders* this was brilliant! So intense and so Dru!

Loved it!

[identity profile] louise39.livejournal.com 2009-06-02 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
So sad and so scary. Poor mad Drusilla.

[identity profile] ubiquirk.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Nice reminder that human Dru was one of the most pious people going and that such added to her insanity once she was evil.

[identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com 2009-06-11 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent capture of the myriad voices chattering and singing in Dru's head.