http://brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] still_grrr2009-11-15 03:45 pm

Ficlet: A Blind Eye (Giles, PG)

Title A Blind Eye
Author Bruttimabuoni
Rating PG
Word Count 400
Prompt 144 (Lovers Walk)
Characters/Pairing (if any) Giles, ensemble




Watcher’s Diary, week commencing 23 November 1998
I have returned from my retreat to find the Slayer and her friends in some disarray, which I admit I do not as yet fully understand. Must hold on to the sense of calm, serenity and peace that I achieved on retreat, otherwise will have been futile waste to go camping and I could have slept in my own bed without the inconvenience of intrusive wildlife and poisonous plants. (Though the retreat was of course a splendid success.)

I noted before leaving that Miss Summers’ SAT scores (Scholastic Aptitude Test, I believe, though the terminology changes. They are in any case used broadly as a university entrance examination in the United States) were gratifyingly high. It is possible that she is in a position to consider an alternative career path. Miss Lehane could pursue the Slayer calling in the interim. One can now conceive of a shared burden; indeed perhaps the option of multiple Slayers arising in each generation should be seriously investigated since it is evidently a possibility – one we have never before had confirmed. I pondered this innovative proposition on my retreat but have yet to come to a decision about whether to share it with the full Council. I fear they might not be receptive to sharing the power of the Slayers more widely.

There were clearly some tensions among the young people in my absence. I confess I have not fully investigated the detail but there appears to have been some reshuffling of the pack of teenage relationships (or perhaps only ruffling, as the pre-existing pairings remain germane), with unfortunate consequences. No doubt it will all come out in the wash. All concerned seem remarkably subdued. Though with Daniel Osbourne, I admit it is rather hard to be certain of that. Buffy herself is unusually silent and reflective, perhaps pondering her career choices.

Of wider note, and the subject of a fuller, separate circular to all duty Watchers, it appears that William the Bloody (continuing to operate under the sobriquet “Spike”) has separated from his paramour Drusilla. He made a fleeting visit to Sunnydale in which he apparently formed a fleeting alliance with the Slayer did no significant harm. Whether severally they will do more or less damage than during their hundred-year partnership of blood remains to be seen and will doubtless be the subject of much Council study in the coming months.

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[identity profile] wiredblowfish.livejournal.com 2009-11-15 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Well done!!!

Totally in character, funny and subtle:)

I especially liked:

"I confess I have not fully investigated the detail but there appears to have been some reshuffling of the pack of teenage relationships (or perhaps only ruffling, as the pre-existing pairings remain germane), with unfortunate consequences."

and this totally rocks:

"William the Bloody (continuing to operate under the sobriquet “Spike”) has separated from his paramour Drusilla. He made a fleeting visit to Sunnydale in which he apparently formed a fleeting alliance with the Slayer did no significant harm. Whether severally they will do more or less damage than during their hundred-year partnership of blood remains to be seen and will doubtless be the subject of much Council study in the coming months."

[identity profile] sentine.livejournal.com 2009-11-15 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh scholar Giles, how much I love thee!

You voiced him perfectly... and made me snort with the reshuffling of the pack of teenage relationships :)

[identity profile] ozma914.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 06:17 am (UTC)(link)
I love this alternative look at things!
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[personal profile] shapinglight 2009-11-16 10:34 am (UTC)(link)
Great, and I love Giles's reluctance to talk to the Council about multiple slayers. Very smart man.
angelus2hot: (Giles car seduced me)

[personal profile] angelus2hot 2009-11-19 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome!!!!!! Perfect Giles voice!!!!

[identity profile] dipenates.livejournal.com 2009-11-19 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this is really nice. You've captured Giles's voice when he's being The Watcher, and I can see him shaping his writing to fit in with what his Council predecessors might have written like.

It slightly clashes with Giles's speaking voice, but I like the performance of it, and the sense of unnaturalness of Giles when he comporting himself according to Council rules.

This fic really made me think about Giles, and I think that's definitely a good thing.
deird1: Fred looking pretty and thoughful (Default)

[personal profile] deird1 2009-11-20 10:48 am (UTC)(link)
I really like this!