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Title Family Unties
Author Brutti ma buoni
Rating PG
Word Count 343
Prompt 182 – BtVS season 5, following on from ‘Family’
Characters/Pairing (if any) Willow/Tara
A/N: Also for the Mundane Bingo prompt ‘waiting for a delivery at home’



Tara was singing. Willow could hear it even through the door. Singing was of the good, especially Tara-singing, which managed to be tuneful as well as happy.

So, presumably, her nose wasn’t too squished from Spike’s Definitely Not A Demon test. Empirical, but also smooshy. Willow did not approve of the hurting-Tara aspect of Spike’s methods. But remembering the way Tara had smiled after he hit her, Willow was prepared to let it pass this once.

“Hi baby,” she said, almost before she’d got into Tara’s room. “You sound joyous. I like!”

Tara was smiling almost too wide to kiss properly. Almost. Willow had patience for important stuff like that.

After a pause, “It feels like I’m new and shiny and lighter, maybe a little like I don’t know myself and-”

Whoa. Tara-babble? Unprecedented. Also cute.

Willow enjoyed the flowing words as they ran on, not needing to focus too hard on the bubbling stream of consciousness. Would it have been so bad if Tara had been part-demon? Maybe not for Willow, but for Tara it was plainly the biggest deal imaginable.

Mr Maclay deserves pain. Snakes and knives and seas of blood- but Tara wouldn’t like it, so Willow dropped the agonising revenge plans and paid attention to her girl again.

“You want to do a spell to celebrate? Something pretty – maybe that entwining enchantment you told me about at the Bronze? Though we better be careful, don’t wanna twine so much we need Buffy or someone to haul us apart. That’s a call I especially don’t want to make to Giles. Ever.”

Tara was shaking her head, though. “There’s a delivery guy coming soon. Better not get too magical just now.”

“Something important? I thought you got those Japanese ingredients already?”

“No. Nothing important. Just my stuff from home.”

“There was stuff?” Of course there was. Not like Tara took her every worldly possession to college.

“Some stuff. Really not important. Dad wants it all gone now.”

They should have been bleak words.

Instead, Tara looked like a woman released.

Date: 2010-08-09 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Now I'm not sure whether to go "Awww" or "sniff".

Snawwwww.

Date: 2010-08-09 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dipenates.livejournal.com
Aww, this is full of cuteness. I love this episode to pieces, and you've written a very lovely coda.

Date: 2010-08-09 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slaymesoftly.livejournal.com
Awwww - cute, loving couple, before it started to go bad. And love Tara's new-found freedom from demonhood.:)

Date: 2010-08-09 11:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cmk418
Lovely. This is one of my favorite episodes and I love how you've followed up with it.

Date: 2010-08-10 06:28 am (UTC)
ext_412536: (i can't keep my eyes of you [btvs])
From: [identity profile] thevera.livejournal.com
That's very sweet. ♥

Date: 2010-08-10 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerkevik.livejournal.com
Hi,

just read this a few minutes ago, and printed it up almost the instant I finished reading it. had to make a move from the library computer to my laptop, but YEAH! I'm here to see it was absolute total cr.. nah, can't do it :-)

I'll go with the Awwfff! thang, but there's a nice (as in the original definition of very precise)ly delivered, at least it seems so to my ears (and I COULD hear the character's voices as I was reading)line

-, "Mr Maclay deserves pain. Snakes and knives and seas of blood- but Tara wouldn’t like it, so Willow dropped the agonising revenge plans and paid attention to her girl again." -

because over the years, having experienced people I care about in that kind of relationship, there was something dark, and slightly abusive, in Willow's growing treatment of Tara as Season 5 came to it's conclusion, which came to it's terrible realisation during and after OMWF.

That taste of what was to come does nothing to take away from the happiness that I can feel in the way you've written Tara here though.

Marvellous and bittersweet, and I wonder at the appropriateness of listening to a largely acoustic cover of New Order's Blue Monday by someone I'd not heard of before, Hannah Peel (just hunted down a link to a YouTube vid version - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aeob-f9ea6U - so that you can check it out for yourself, and see what I mean).
Thanks for this,

Still under Willow & Tara's spell,
Ray.
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Date: 2010-08-11 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katmarajade.livejournal.com
This is so sweet! I adore this pairing, especially fics that tie into canon storylines! Babbling Tara is so wonderfully sweet and makes me smile! And I love the whimsical Willow speak that you wrote in. Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Date: 2010-08-11 09:09 pm (UTC)
lokifan: black Converse against a black background (Default)
From: [personal profile] lokifan
:DDDD Love it!

Date: 2010-09-04 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wyncatastrophe.livejournal.com
Followed the link from crack_van over here, and I'm very glad I did. It's a lovely, bright-and-bubbly little piece, and you've gotten Willow's inner dialogue exactly right, which is trick to do and yet delicious when it succeeds. It's a beautiful little ficlet. :)

Date: 2010-09-04 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honoria.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely.
I can hear their voices in this.
Thank you.

Date: 2010-09-04 11:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trovia.livejournal.com
Aww, this was really cute. Like Willow, I like. :)

Date: 2010-09-05 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eg06.livejournal.com
Every time I read a fic featuring Tara, I once again have the overwhelming desire to smack Joss and demand what the hell he was thinking, killing her off.

This was the perfect tag to "Family" and I love it! ^_^

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