007: Fabricated Memories [Eve]

[remember-nomore.livejournal.com]

Title: Fabricated Memories
Author: remember_nomore/simply_shiny
Rating: G
Word Count: 231
Prompt: n/a [Minor Characters Week]
Character: Eve


For a girl who’s filled with memories, Eve has a few that stick out in her mind, small things that any mortal wouldn’t think twice about. At least that’s what she thinks. She didn’t get her memories like everyone else; she didn’t get them through life and have them happen as she got older.

One day she wasn’t even a thought, the next…she was twenty-five.

She was created, made of flesh and bone. Eve’s mind was filled with facts and information important to the firm, important to her job and aided her in keeping Angel and his crew in line. The Senior Partners also filled Eve’s mind with memories to help her achieve that ‘human connection’ they felt she needed to gain whatever in’s she could within the tight knit group.

The one memory that is Eve’s favorite has to be the one that came when she was – humanly – six months old. She remembers the fear, the feel of the pen in her hand and the scratching it made against the paper. Eve remembers the smell of his aftershave as he loomed over her, a sadistic smile on his lips as they watched the ink glow and then turn red and then the moment she felt her heart beat as he took the pen from her.

It was the moment she became mortal, it was the first time she felt alive.
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Comments

[wereleopard58.livejournal.com]

Wow as i said i wasn't an eve fan but this makes you look at her in a different way, well done for making me do that for most things there are two sides to a story, depending on the story LOL

[remember-nomore.livejournal.com]

ty again :) I have a large amount of Eve fic that I'm about to post. Should be interesting.

She really might have been 'mini-lilah' to some but she was realy nothing more than a broken puppet for the partners.

[wereleopard58.livejournal.com]

Well i look forward to reading those cause you are amazing writer if they are not on here can you send me or tell me where they are posted, i just love fanfic

[remember-nomore.livejournal.com]

Awww thank you. It's funny 'cause I always think that as much as I love Eve I write her weakly. Tara and Lindsey seem to be my strong suit.
You can go here: simply_shiny
If you'd like I can link you to the post that I did on new years with the round up for the year 81000+ words. hehe

Feel free to spam with comments, most people mind, I don't :)

[wereleopard58.livejournal.com]

Cool will take a look and i don't think you write her weakly, i don't think i write any character as i should i just enjoy doing it and you can see that you do in your words

[scarlettlily.livejournal.com]

Very interesting.

[blueanddollsome.livejournal.com]

Ah! (that was what this fic made me say)

I like your characterization. How whoeverthatdudeis thinks he's punishing her, but Eve's actually pleased.

[remember-nomore.livejournal.com]

*giggle* The man that made her sign was Hamilton if you remember from Underneath. This was just another take on it :)

Thanks for the feedback

[boy-named-susie.livejournal.com]

Great ficlet. Love your use of language in this one.

[xlivvielockex.livejournal.com]

Interesting look into Eve here, what she was feeling at the time that she signed her live and her power over to Hamilton. I had read a few things here and there about that moment but this was definitely something new. Very nice.